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Model: Marta G.

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=quesada888 Jul 6, 2009, 4:01:53 PM
ahh..=) she is really pretty

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i'm a sculptor, check out my works.
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=elare Jul 7, 2009, 7:30:59 AM
and it's just the beginning of the series! :)
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=quesada888 Jul 7, 2009, 2:22:39 PM
yay!! im excited

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i'm a sculptor, check out my works.
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=elare Jul 7, 2009, 2:24:06 PM
[link] - here's the first part :)
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=quesada888 Jul 7, 2009, 2:30:46 PM
sweet i love it=) thanks for the link. i faved the webpage already

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i'm a sculptor, check out my works.
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~Bupknar Jul 6, 2009, 3:16:36 PM
Interesting pose, and I always love the sunlight in shots like these :-)

Only one thing, maybe a bit more contrast between the model's hair and the tree in the background would have helped, since they are almost the same brightness right now.
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=elare Jul 7, 2009, 7:35:36 AM
yeah, that might look better with brighter background :)
I'll try to edit it later and see the results :D
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~Bupknar Jul 7, 2009, 1:36:39 PM
Tell me if you do! And if you have any suggestions on how to improve any of my deviations, don't hesitate to say so either ;-) Your work is really good, and I want to learn from people!
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=elare Jul 7, 2009, 1:54:29 PM
you should work on multiple layers in order to avoid loosing quality of the image. and work on different adjustments such as curves, levels, channel mixer - depends on what you want to achieve - but not on the image itself, but -->layers-->adjustments [in photoshop]

and you need to photograph as much as you can, it's the best method to improve your skills :)
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~Bupknar Jul 7, 2009, 2:33:09 PM
Hrm, I didn't know about adjustment layers, unfortunately they are not in Gimp, which I use. Maybe in the future...

And photographing as much as I can, will do! :D
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