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Model: Ewa
Stylization, MUA, Photo: Me

my first fashion! :dance:


EDIT:
slightly better version


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Critiques


:iconmastermayhem:
This is a wonderful image in a great number of ways. The pose is perfect for the model's features. The angle of the left arm matching the line on the wall behind is brilliant! I hope that it was intentional.. if not, say it is! The division of the textures and colors on the wall falls right above the middle and right below the third line and creates a nice bottom weight to the image. Seeing the head and especially the chin above that line with an upward tilt makes me see a 'head above water' element which strengthens the dualistic confidant/slightly strained look on the model's face. The washed colors work well here with the slightly blue (cool feeling) and bright sun (warm feeling) contrast that is going on. The only thing that I don't like is how the subject is centered in the frame. The angle of the left arm helps a bit, but I would like to see her shifted to the left side of the frame more. Overall, I like this image a lot. Great work!
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:icondimitriskats:
A+ for the title!
It is very centered
and I agree with :iconmastermayhem:
A part on the left can be cut out.

First Fashion :boogie:
:iconl3vre:
pieknie:D nic dodaj nic ujac:D
:iconelare:
I know I know about the left part :P
I cut it in PS recently to try the look but I prefer this one the most :)
:icondimitriskats:
There is no law that forbids centering objects.
The tendency is to avoid it because most of the times off-centering the main object adds composition interest.
I have to agree with you, centering works positively here. It is a fashion photo,
we need to see the model first!

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Apr 3, 2009, 4:05:01 PM

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